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A delightfully sexy prize to come back to right after getting out of a game as Raka herself. <3
Not gonna lie, I'd almost figured you'd put this on the back burner after all the Digimon stories started rolling out and you spoke of your enthusiasm about writing a bunch of transformations involving them (though I have read and enjoyed some of them all the same). I couldn't help but squee like a twelve-year-old girl when I saw Soraka's name in dA's inbox, and you even coincidentally picked my favourite piece of Soraka artwork ever to go with it! Needless to say I'm pretty pleased to be proven wrong.
Some run-on thoughts in lieu of a better analysis since it's past 3am in the UK right now: the more visceral parts of the transformation were handled in a quite realistic (IMO) way and that's the way I like the most, even if it is painful for recipient at first - I guessed you'd enjoy writing about her leg bones cracking and shifting around into a completely different unguligrade form. I feel the stars' role in her change of heart was slightly overdone, and would be better represented through gentle encouragement than seemingly making Sara out to be their Chosen One; nonetheless, I found her mental transformation believable enough that it didn't ruin my immersion, which is one of the most important conditions for a story. The growth was delicious - I especially liked the idea that her legs and thighs filled out with a lot of internal muscle to give her some mean horsepower under the bonnet (if you get what I mean) but I was totally happy with the attention given to her butt and breasts as well. An 8-foot Starchild is crazy huge and bigger than I thought she'd be, but I definitely liked it more than way. I'm not someone who's so often conservative about his size preferences, as you can tell.
So while there's a few kinks here and there that can be worked out I'm totally satisfied with this one, dude. Totally don't regret staying up hours after midnight to get this read and reviewed. Thanks for the work.
... oh, and who's this 'Gashu' fellow you mention at the end of your Tumblr post? Never heard of him, but he sounds like a cool guy! :3
Not gonna lie, I'd almost figured you'd put this on the back burner after all the Digimon stories started rolling out and you spoke of your enthusiasm about writing a bunch of transformations involving them (though I have read and enjoyed some of them all the same). I couldn't help but squee like a twelve-year-old girl when I saw Soraka's name in dA's inbox, and you even coincidentally picked my favourite piece of Soraka artwork ever to go with it! Needless to say I'm pretty pleased to be proven wrong.
Some run-on thoughts in lieu of a better analysis since it's past 3am in the UK right now: the more visceral parts of the transformation were handled in a quite realistic (IMO) way and that's the way I like the most, even if it is painful for recipient at first - I guessed you'd enjoy writing about her leg bones cracking and shifting around into a completely different unguligrade form. I feel the stars' role in her change of heart was slightly overdone, and would be better represented through gentle encouragement than seemingly making Sara out to be their Chosen One; nonetheless, I found her mental transformation believable enough that it didn't ruin my immersion, which is one of the most important conditions for a story. The growth was delicious - I especially liked the idea that her legs and thighs filled out with a lot of internal muscle to give her some mean horsepower under the bonnet (if you get what I mean) but I was totally happy with the attention given to her butt and breasts as well. An 8-foot Starchild is crazy huge and bigger than I thought she'd be, but I definitely liked it more than way. I'm not someone who's so often conservative about his size preferences, as you can tell.
So while there's a few kinks here and there that can be worked out I'm totally satisfied with this one, dude. Totally don't regret staying up hours after midnight to get this read and reviewed. Thanks for the work.
... oh, and who's this 'Gashu' fellow you mention at the end of your Tumblr post? Never heard of him, but he sounds like a cool guy! :3